Question

10．阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Micro Blog has become another classroom for Zhai Langwei，a 21-year-old student majoring in English at Guangdong University of Foreign Studies，and me teachers are celebrities （名人） in academia （学术界）．
Zhai discussed with Lu Gusun the possible English translation of"literary young women"in Chinese．Lu is me chief editor of the English-Chinese Dictionary，a popular dictionary printed by the Shanghai Translation Publishing House．
Zhai is interested in zoology （动物学） as well．He filled in a quiz from a zoologist of the Science Squirrels Club．He got full marks and me expert's attention．"The feedback （回复） from great scholars has encouraged me to follow my interests，"said Zhai．
Zhai is one of hundreds of millions of Micro Blog users in China．According to China Internet Network Information Center，by the end of June 2010，72.3percent of Micro Blog users were college students
The information on Micro Blogs is short and sweet，and it can be spread by being forwarded by one user after another．This may be partly the reason why，with the help of Micro Blogs，students areable to  interact with celebrities
More and more students have started keeping in touch with celebrities for interaction on Micro Blogs．
写作内容
作为时下最流行的网络社交工具，微博越来越受到学生们的青睐．学校最近组织了一次关于微博流行的讨论．请你准备写一份发言稿，题目是‘‘The Advantages and Disadvantages ofMicro Blogs"，内容要点包括：
1．以约30个词概括这篇短文；
2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对微博的看法，内容包括：
（1）微博对于学生与名人之间互动的重要性；
（2）举一两个例子去论证"微博的利与弊"：
（3）你的看法．
写作要求
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：get face-to-face interaction with（面对面交流），be of vital importance （重要），communicate with（与…交流），encourage them to （鼓励某人做某事），pursue their dreams （追逐梦想），with the help of（在…帮助之下），be admitted to（被录取），gain college admission（获得进入的权利），by means of（通过），on account of （由于），share sth with sb（与某人分享某物），．
【高分句型一】
1．Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students，on which they can get face-to-face interaction with celebrities in academia and broaden their horizons．
此处是由"介词+关系代词"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students"．
【高分句型二】
1．She was a senior high school student in Kaifeng，Henan who attended the National College Entrance Examination and got good grades，only to find that she was not admitted．
此处是关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a senior high school student"，关系代词"who"在定语从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
2．On the other hand，there is no doubt that some drawbacks of Micro Blogs exist．
此处是由连接词词"that"引导的同位语从句，"that"引导的从句进一步解释说明名词"doubt"的具体内容．
【高分句型四】
3．Micro Blogs which bring us numerous benefits in the virtual world can be an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的定语从句，先行词为"Micro Blogs"，同时也是句子的主语，句子的谓语为"can be"，表语为"an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other"．

解答 Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students，on which they can get face-to-face interaction with celebrities in academia and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】（概括）
      Thereby obviously，it is of vital importance for students to use Micro Blogs to communicate with authorities and big names，and the feedback from the celebrities can encourage them to pursue their dreams．It is also clear to see that some events are able to be resolved with the help of Micro Blogs．（微博对于学生与名人之间互动的重要性）
       Take Li Mengmeng event as an illustration．She was a senior high school student in Kaifeng，Henan who attended the National College Entrance Examination and got good grades，only to find that she was not admitted．【高分句型二】Fortunately，she gained college admission within 24 hours by means of the support from Micro Blogs．On the other hand，there is no doubt that some drawbacks of Micro Blogs exist．【高分句型三】On account of Micro Blogs，an enormous amount of shameful news like family scandal will be enlarged．（举例论证"微博的利与弊）
      I assert that the positive aspects of Micro Blogs far outweigh the negative ones．Regulated properly，Micro Blogs which bring us numerous benefits in the virtual world can be an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other．【高分句型四】（个人观点）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．