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【题目】短文改错。

Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, that are called Donkey Friends (驴友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

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【答案】Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, are called Donkey Friends (驴友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their . The other students in our class think it not safe to organize dangerous activities. They make suggestions laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

【解析】

试题分析：第一处：are called Donkey Friends (驴友) in Chinese.是定语从句修饰先行词hikers，先行词指人，定语从句中缺少主语，且此处是非限制性定语从句，故把that改为who。

第二处：A discussion和hold之间是被动关系，应该用现在完成时的被动语态，故在has后面加been。

第三处：make sb. do sth.是固定结构，意为“使某人做某事”，故去掉feel前面的to。

第四处：修饰动词attract用副词，故把deep改为deeply。

第五处：relaxing表示“令人放松的”，表示“感到放松的”应该是relaxed，故把relaxing改为relaxed。

第六处：happen是不及物动词，无被动形式，而且accidents与happen之间也是主动关系，故去掉happened前面的been。

第七处：because后面接句子，此处poor knowledge of hiking是名词短语，要用because of，故在because后面加of。

第八处：句子主语是Some hikers，那么“失去他们的生命”也应该是复数，故把life改为lives。

第九处：在“so/such+形容词+名词”结构中，如果名词是复数形式，用such，故把so改为such。

第十处：laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities是同位语从句，作suggestions的同位语，对suggestions的内容进行解释，同位语从句中结构完整，应该用that引导，故把which改为that。本句句意：他们提出了制定法律以及步行者在参加活动前应该进行培训的建议。