Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know which one to buy, because these books were both useful to me. At last, I chose two. At 10:00, we went to the cinema; the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】does—is

【2】go—went

【3】was—were

【4】both—all

【5】calling—called

【6】see后加it

【7】去掉and

【8】out—into

【9】very—well

【10】happy—happier

【解析】

【1】does—is 句意：我的生活也充满了阳光。be full of充满---，所以此处用be动词，故把does—is。

【2】go—went 句意：九点钟和朋友去的图书馆。可知用一般过去时态，故把go—went。

【3】was—were 句意：有许多新书。此处主语是复数形式，故把was—were。

【4】both—all 句意：这些书对我都有用。这里指所有的书，故把both—all。

【5】calling—called 句意：被称作泰坦尼克号的电影。此处是过去分词后置定语，故把calling—called。

【6】see后加it 句意：看这部电影需要3个小时。故在see后加it。

【7】去掉and 此处是现在分词作时间状语，不是并列句，故去掉and。

【8】out—into 固定词组：burst into tears放声大哭，故把out—into。

【9】very—well 固定用法：be well worth doing非常值得做某事。故把very—well。

【10】happy—happier even放在比较级前面修饰比较级，加强语气。故把happy—happier。