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【题目】短文改错

We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at the first believe in yourself. On your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put down your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

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文章作者主要讲述我们每个人都想要成功，但如何才能成功呢？作者给我们一些建议。

第一处：形容词形式用法错误。因为有than所以用形容词的比较级。句意：对一些人来说，欲望要大于普通人。故将great改为greater。

第二处：句法错误。形容词successful前缺少be动词。句意：事实上，每个人都想要成功。故在successful前加be。

第三处：词性用法错误。work既可作动词也可作名词。句意：但很少有人愿意付出辛勤劳动的代价。故将working改为work。

第四处：词性用法错误。修饰名词 secrets应该用形容词。句意：成功是一种态度,它没有什么真正的秘诀可言。故将really改为real。

第五处：主谓一致用法错误。主语为it，谓语动词应该使用第三人称单数形式。句意：一切都从你的信仰体系开始。故将start改为starts。

第六处：连接词用法错误。feel为连系动词，故用how。句意：你的信仰体系始于你对自己的感觉。故将what改为how。

第七处： 短语用法错误。短语at first起初。句意：你必须首先相信自己。故将the去掉。

第八处：词性用法错误。to为介词，故用名词作宾语。句意：在你成功的路上。故将succeed改为success。

第九处：非谓语动词用法错误。动名词短语作主语。句意：试图这样做只会导致失望。故将attempt改为attempting。

第十处：介词用法错误。在句式“It is(was)+adj+ for sb.+ to do sth”中，作表语的形容词大多是表事物性质的静态形容词；而在句式“It is(was)+adj.+of sb. to do sth.”中，作表语的形容词大多是表示人物特征的形容词。句意：你有明确的目标是必要的。故将of改为for。