Question

6．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
    此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
    此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的请不要改．
Mr．Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens.76．where→who
He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so he lived in a very hot        77．so→but
part of the country．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in   summer，78．hen→hens
and then he decided to put his air conditioner into his chicken house        79．√
so that his hens would lay well all through year．The boss of   the air        80．在year前面加the
conditioning company came to see her one day．He thought that he            81．her→him
might be able to persuade him to buy for an air conditioner when he             82．去掉for
saw Mr．Hill's house，"Your wife would be more happier and more              83．happy→happier
comfortable then，"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．Hill was not interesting.84．interesting→interested
"My wife didn't lay eggs，"Mr．Hill said.85．didn't→doesn't．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文是一则笑话．Mr Hill是养鸡的，卖鸡蛋赚了很多钱，但是他居住的地方炎热，为了让鸡下更多的蛋，他想给鸡舍里安装空调．空调老板过来查看，他想说服Mr Hill给她的妻子安装空调，Mr Hill回答说："我的妻子又不生蛋．"

解答 Mr．Hill was a chicken farmerwherehad hundreds of chickens．
                                             who
He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money，so he lived in a very hot  
                                                              but
  part of the country．He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in   summer，
                                                   hens
and then he decided to put his air conditioner into his chicken house       
   
so that his hens would lay well all through∧year．The boss of   the air     
                                                             the
conditioning company came to see herone day．He thought that he       
                                                  him
might be able to persuade him to buy for an air conditioner when he        
                                                      去掉
saw Mr．Hill's house，"Your wife would be more happier and more       
                                                                去掉
comfortable then，"he said to Mr．Hill．But Mr．Hill was not interesting．
                                                                                              interested
"My wife didn'tlay eggs，"Mr．Hill said．．
               doesn't
76．where→who．考查定语从句． 先行词是人，定语从句who had hundreds of chickens修饰farmer．
77．so→but．考查连词．此处前后之间是转折关系，所以用but．
78．hen→hens．考查名词单复数．根据句子后半部分中的his hens would lay well可知此处用hens．
79．√．
80．在year前面加the．考查冠词．all through the year是固定表达，表示"全年，一年四季"．
81．her→him．考查人称代词．此处指空调公司的老板来看Mr Hill，所以用him．
82．去掉for．buy是及物动词，直接跟要买的东西，所以去掉for．
83．去掉more．考查比较级．此处用形容词的比较级不与more连用．
84．interesting→interested．考查形容词．interesting有趣的，令人感到有趣的； interested感到有趣的．表示"某人感兴趣"，用sb．be interested．
85．didn't→doesn't．考查时态．此处是直接引语，表示客观事实，所以用一般现在时．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．