Question

【题目】假定你是李华，收到好友王林的电子邮件，说他在英语学习上用功不少，但是效果不好，他想放弃英语学习。请你根据以下内容回复王林，劝他不要放弃英语学习。

1. 要对自己有信心（have confidence in）；

2. 与英语学习好的同学交朋友；

3. 进步时奖励自己。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Lin,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English. I’d like to give you my advice on learning English.

First of all, you should have confidence in yourself, which is very important to English learning. Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you. Thirdly, learning English well is a long process. Remember: reward yourself when you have made progress, which will inspire you greatly. Anyway, you mustn’t give up learning English. Believe in yourself. Where there’s a will, there’s a way.

Hope my suggestions will work.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出；写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅；注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次。注意词数100左右。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，内容齐全，句子衔接紧密，布局合理，使用高级句子。I’m sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English.使用宾语从句；you should have confidence in yourself, which is very important to English learning. which引导非限制性定语从句；you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you. who引导限制性定语从句；learning English well is a long process.动名词作主语；Remember: reward yourself when you have made progress, which will inspire you greatly.时间状语从句和非限制性定语从句巧妙结合；另外，First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, Anyway, Where there’s a will, there’s a way.的运用为文章增色添彩。