Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你听说美国青年 Martin在北京开了一间茶室（tea house），该茶室面向年轻人提供世界各地的茶饮。你对茶文化感兴趣，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 对该茶室的作用作出肯定的评价；

2. 表达你想暑假期间到该茶室当志愿者的愿望，并说明其目的。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数

Dear Martin,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Dear martin,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student in China. I’m so glad to learn that you have opened a tea house in Beijing that provides teas from around the world for young people. No doubt this gives us a good chance to appreciate the tea cultures of the world and thus helps us to develop a better understanding of the world.

As a young Chinese who is interested in tea culture, I do hope I can work as a volunteer in your tea house during the summer vacation so that I can help to make the tea cultures of the world known to more young people. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假定你是李华，你听说美国青年 Martin在北京开了一间茶室（tea house），该茶室面向年轻人提供世界各地的茶饮。你对茶文化感兴趣，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 对该茶室的作用做出肯定的评价；2. 表达你想暑假期间到该茶室当志愿者的愿望，并说明其目的。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，对该茶室的作用做出肯定的评价。第二段， 表达你想暑假期间到该茶室当志愿者的愿望，并说明其目的。第三段，期望回复。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: opened a tea house，provides tea，No doubt， appreciate the tea cultures of the world，develop a better understanding of the world，be interested in，work as，during the summer vacation，take my application into consideration。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的宾语从句和that引导的定语从句 I’m so glad to learn that you have opened a tea house in Beijing that provides teas from around the world for young people. who引导的定语从句和so that 引导的目的状语从句 As a young Chinese who is interested in tea culture, I do hope I can work as a volunteer in your tea house during the summer vacation so that I can help to make the tea cultures of the world known to more young people。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides, however, Finally。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。