Question

【题目】“幽默感”被认为是人类最重要的品质之一。请你用英语写一篇短文陈述幽默的好处。要点如下：

1．促进学习；2. 有益健康；3. 缓解压力；4. 增进友谊。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

A sense of humor is considered to be one of the most important human qualities which improve our life in different ways. Firstly，at school，a humorous teacher can help students focus their attention very easily，and the students will become more active and creative when experiencing the joy of learning. Secondly，humor has a positive effect on our health. It's said that laughter is the best medicine. Thirdly，humor helps us remove stress and have a positive attitude toward life. Finally，I believe humor can be a powerful and delightful way to establish close friendships with people.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲类，根据提示信息来写幽默的好处。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑递进关系来写。本文写作时可以按照四个方面来进行介绍。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如固定结构，同时还是定语从句A sense of humor is considered to be one of the most important human qualities which improve our life in different ways.时间状语从句the students will become more active and creative when experiencing the joy of learning.固定句型it is said that，同时也是名句It's said that laughter is the best medicine。此外，文章还使用了大量短语focus their attention 、has a positive effect on 、have a positive attitude toward life、establish close friendships等，连接词Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly、Finally，使语言更加连贯。