Question

12．假设你是李明，你的英国朋友Tom来信关心你参加期中考试的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知．
1．考试准备情况
2．考试时的状态
3．对试题的感受
4．可能的考试结果
注意：
1．词数100字左右
2．开头和结尾已经为你写好
3．可适当增加细节，使文章连贯
参考词汇：期中考试  mid-term examination
Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern．

Answer 1

分析 假设你是李明，你的英国朋友Tom来信关心你参加期中考试的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知．1．考试准备情况；2．考试时的状态；3．对试题的感受；4．可能的考试结果．要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在100词左右，不要太多或太少．书信的开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
【亮点说明】It is now common knowledge that the College Entrance Examination is held on June 6 and 7 annually，as a national policy，during which，seven different subjects are tested depending on what you learn，science or art．句中包含了that引导的主语从句，during which引导的定语从句和what引导的宾语从句；For me，Chinese，Math，English，Politics，History and Geography are included．此句中运用了被动语态；I spent a whole year reviewing all the subjects carefully until I thought I was fully prepared．在句中使用了until引导的时间状语从句和被动语态；Frankly speaking，the papers were （are） not so hard for me despite some difficulty．句中运用了独立成分，为文章增色添彩；Consequently，I have every right to believe that I shall be very likely to be admitted to my dreaming university．本句中使用了高级词汇、固定搭配和宾语从句．文章层次结构严谨，精彩不断．

解答 Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．It is now common knowledge that the College Entrance Examination is held on June 6 and 7 annually，as a national policy，during which，seven different subjects are tested depending on what you learn，science or art．（高分句型） For me，Chinese，Math，English，Politics，History and Geography are included．
Due to its great importance，every student in China would do his best to get ready for it，and I am no exception．（高分句型） I spent a whole year reviewing all the subjects carefully until I thought I was fully prepared．Eventually，the day came．Nervous at first，but I did give the best．Frankly speaking，the papers were   not so hard for me despite some difficulty．Consequently，I have every right to believe that I shall be very likely to be admitted to my dreaming university．（高分句型） Just wish me good luck．
Looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．