Question

【题目】假如你是高中学生李华，最近发现一些同学经常到学校附近的网吧(Internet bar)。几天前，你也去了一次，发现了许多不良现象。请根据下面的提示写一封信给某报社编辑，发表看法，提建议。

1许多同学在网吧玩不健康的游戏，看电影，聊天(chat)。

2 网吧应是获取有用信息的地方。

3学校应采取措施阻止学生去网吧。

4学生充分利用因特网(Internet)来学习。

要求词数：100左右。

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Dear Editor,

I am a senior high school student. I am writing this letter to tell you something. Recently I found that

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I am a senior high school student. I am writing this letter to tell you something. Recently I found that some students often go to the Internet bar nearby, spending most of their spare time on the computer games. What's more, some even go there during the school hours. One weekend, a few days ago, led by a classmate, I went to the bar. Entering the bar, I was shocked. What a terrible place! The bar was full of smoke, with beer bottles here and there. Cigarette in hand, tens of students in school uniforms sat in front of the computers, letting out horrible noise while playing games. I stayed inside for several minutes, then I left. I really could not stand it.

The phenomenon has last for a long time, nobody stops it. It's rule that no bar can exist near a school. Dear editor, I think our government should ban the bar immediately. What's your opinion?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全、结构完整。文中使用了大量的短语，如spend… on、What's more、be full of、let out等。还使用了一些复合句，如：It's rule that no bar can exist near a school.以及非谓语动词的使用，如：One weekend, a few days ago, led by a classmate, I went to the bar. Entering the bar,。