Question

9．认真观察以下三幅图片，然后选择其中的一幅图片写一篇作文．请你详细描述所选图片内容，然后针对图片内容表达你的观点，并阐述看法和理由．
注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息．

Answer 1

分析 本篇图画作文分为三幅，前两幅都是讲合作团结的重要性，第三幅是讲不同角度看待问题会有不同的答案．考生应该选择自己最有话可写的一幅入手，按照要求，先描述画面内容，再提出自己的观点．要注意应该使用一般现在时．
重要短语：
 as is depicted，正如..所描述的那样，keep in step with，与…保持一致，in short，简而言之．
高分句子：
1．However，it is obvious that people can not do this alone．本句中含有重要句型 it is obvious that，…很明显．
2．Clearly，it was the cooperation through which we won the victory over the earthquake．本句为明显的强调句结构，it was…which…

解答 As is depicted in the first cartoon．The three people go throush the the broken bridge successfully when they together．（描述图画） However，it is obvious that people can not do this alone．（高分句型）The picture really sets me thinking．It manifests the importance of cooperation and the necessity of keeping in step with each other．
    There are a lot of examples to illustrate the issue．The most obvious one is the case with war on earthquake in 2008．（举出例子）At that time the whole country was plagued by earthquake．But led by our government，people from all walks of life in the society were mobilized and united as one．Clearly，it was the cooperation through which we won the victory over the earthquake．（高分句型）
    In my opinion，the dependence of people on one another has now increased，without which the society we live in cannot keep going smoothly．In short，cooperation has become a driving force for the development of our country．（提出自己观点）

点评 看图作文要求将画面所包含的有效信息用文字表达出来，并适当发挥想象．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．