Question

有市民向记者报料：网上有人代写暑假作业, 且参与代写的学生大多是在校大学生。“枪手”透露：代写作业收入可观。引起了各方说法。你作为记者将此事报道在某教育报上。

 

学生	作业太多找人代劳很无奈。
家长	强烈反对这种做法，只会耽误孩子的学业。
老师	暑假作业应因人而异：老师在布置作业时应该根据不同成绩的学生设置不同的作业，  这样既能对学生有所帮助也能减轻学生负担。
专家	代写作业害人不浅。老师不能把暑假当成学期的延伸，布置作业应尽量少，让学生在暑假得到充分的休息。

 

【写作内容】

市民报料网上代写作业现象；

各方说法。

【写作要求】

1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

Some citizens told reporters that some do summer homework for middle school students on line and those who do homework for middle school students are mostly college students, who reveal that they are well paid by doing homework for others. The phenomenon has aroused different opinions . In many students' view, there is so much homework that they have no choice but to ask others to do it but parents strongly oppose the behaviour, saying that it will delay the children's studies. Some teachers suggest summer homework should vary from student to student and that teachers should assign different homework according to the student with different grades, thus not only helping them a little but also lessening their study burden. Some experts believe that doing homework for others does great harm to students and that teachers should give as little homework as possible and let the students have enough rest during the summer vacation instead of regarding summer vacation as the extension of the learning semester.

【解析】

试题分析：首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如do summer homework, have no choice but to, does great harm to,还运用了who引导的定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：In many students' view；thus等等。

考点：基础写作。