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Writing：（1小题， 满分30 分）
随着社会和经济的发展，近三十年来义乌变化巨大。义乌人越来越富有，生活越过越好。有人就提出在义乌也建一个Disneyland。你对此有什么看法？请就“Is it necessary to build a Disneyland in Yiwu”这个问题，说说你的观点。开头已给，请接着写即可。
注意：
1.观点必须鲜明；
2.理由至少两条以上；
3.段落分明，条例清楚，书写工整，无涂改。
4.词数 120 左右。
Disneyland in Yiwu?
With the development of society and economy,

Answer 1

…great changes have taken place in Yiwu over the recent three decades. Obviously, people in Yiwu are getting increasingly rich. That’s why some of them suggest building a Disneyland in Yiwu. However, in my opinion, it is not necessary at all. My reasons are as follows.
Firstly, as is known to all, a Disneyland takes up a large area of land, which Yiwu is not rich in. Actually, Yiwu has has great difficulty in meeting its need for land.
Besides, there are already too many people coming to Yiwu every day. If a Disneyland is built, it is certain that millions of tourists will come flooding in. As a result, various problems will appear,such as traffic jams and pollution.
Therefore, I’d rather not buld a Disneyland in Yiwu.
…great changes have taken place in Yiwu over the recent three decades. Obviously, people in Yiwu are getting increasingly rich. That’s why some of them suggest building a Disneyland in Yiwu. I can’t agree more with them.
To begin with, everyone, men or women, young or old, enjoys visiting Disneyland very much because people can have various kinds of entertainments as well as enlarge their knowledge and broaden their horizons.
Besides, as we all know, tourism is increasing wherever a Disneyland is built. It can’t be denied that Yiwu is poor in tourism and that a Disneyland will contribute greatly to its development.
In a word, there are more advantages than disadvantages if a Disneyland is built in Yiwu. I can’t wait to see one built here.

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