Question

18．某中学生英语报开展展征文活动，主题为"2009年北京的交通状况"．下面的图表是2009年北京交通出行结构示意图．请结合图表内容，用英语写一篇简要的报告，并就某个数据说说你的观点，参加征文活动．词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
At the same time，the people who drove made up 34% of the total，which shows the increasing tendency of private cars．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，people should be encouraged to use buses or subways，as it can reduce pollution and relieve traffic jams
句型一 ①who drove made up 34% of the total 该句是一个由who引导的定语从句，who在句中作主语，替代先行词the people ②which shows the increasing tendency of private cars．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句中作主语，替代前面整个主句的内容
句型二 as it can reduce pollution and relieve traffic jams 该句是一个由as 引导的原因状语从句

解答 The chart shows the percentage of the different means of transportation people used in Beijing in 2009.38.9% of the people preferred to use public transportation，such as buses，or subways．At the same time，the people who drove made up 34% of the total，which shows the increasing tendency of private cars．（高分句型一）The result also shows only 18.1% of the people traveled by bike，while 7.1% of the people took taxis，and 1.9% tried other means of transportation．（描述情况）
  From the data showed above，more than one third of the citizens are in favor of public transportation．In my opinion，people should be encouraged to use buses or subways，as it can reduce pollution and relieve traffic jams．（高分句型二）（提出建议）Besides，it is very economical and convenient．

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