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4．假定你是李华，请根据下面的英文信息提示，选一份你喜欢的工作并写一篇100词左右的求职信．信的开头与结尾格式已给出．
Write a letter asking about one of the jobs below．
（1）TELEPHONE SALES PERSON wanted．
Must be fluent in English and one other language．
Eight-hour day，good pay．Tel：0208-674-3242
（2）MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has temporary jobs as chefs，waiters，and kitchen staff．
For more information write to Ms Kate Rees，17Park End St．
（3）MODELS wanted over t．he summer．I'm looking for a number of models to work both in the studio and on location：If you're thinking about a career as a model，or actress，this might be a good chance to get some good shots．Email：jonathan@modelsearch．com．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文提示描述了三个岗位，分别是电话销售员，厨师或服务生，模特或艺术家．要求考生选择自己感兴趣的职位写一封求职信．注意信的格式正确，以及使用第一，第二人称．
重要短语：
in regard to，关于，high standards of，高标准的，roll-up-your-sleeves work ethic，挽起袖子埋头苦干，
高分句子：
and I would welcome the chance for an interview which is to discuss your needs and outline my strengths in person．本句中含有which引导的定语从句，修饰interview．

解答 Dear Ms Kate Rees：
    In regard to the open cook position you have posted on Monster，I am very interested in the opportunity．Perhaps after reading this letter and enclosed resume，you will agree we have a mutually beneficial reason to meet．（表明求职目的）
    My credentials include：12 years of cooking experience in a hotel setting； A track record of increasing clientele by preparing top-quality meals and maintaining high standards of excellence：Respected leadership skills with experience training and motivating kitchen staff to work together as a team．And expertise in menu planning and food/supplies ordering．（描述自己特长资历）
   As a cook for major catering company，I maintained an excellent performance record and earned a reputation for dedication，teamwork and a roll-up-your-sleeves work ethic．
   The cook position sounds like an outstanding opportunity，and I would welcome the chance for an interview which is to discuss your needs and outline my strengths in person．（高分句型） You may reach me at 718-555-1212． Thank you for your time and consideration of my resume，and I look forward to speaking with you．（留下自己联系方式和祝愿）
Sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 在完成作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，