Question

【题目】假定你是李华，正在外国学习。上周六乘出租车(车号:HHX80W)去你导师家途中经历了不愉快的事情，请你用英语给出租汽车公司经理写信表达自己的诉求。要点如下:

1. 起因:司机故意多绕路并且言语粗鲁;

2. 要求:出租车司机道歉，退还多收的钱。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to make a complaint about the poor service of one of your taxi drivers.

Last Saturday, I took the taxi whose license number is HHX80W to my tutors. However, the driver took a roundabout route/ road deliberately to charge more money. And then he shouted at me rudely when I argued with him. What’s worse, as I tried to ask for the extra money back, he refused and even threatened me. I felt so annoyed.

Please have the taxi driver apologize and return the extra money to me as soon as possible. Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇书信：假定你是李华，正在外国学习。上周六乘出租车(车号:HHX80W)去你导师家途中经历了不愉快的事情，请你用英语给出租汽车公司经理写信表达自己的诉求。要点如下: 起因:司机故意多绕路并且言语粗鲁; 要求:出租车司机道歉，退还多收的钱。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：make a complaint about（对---抱怨）；took a roundabout route/ road（迂回的路线）；argued with（与---辩论）；as soon as possible（尽可能快）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，结构严谨，语句精炼，布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。I took the taxi whose license number is HHX80W to my tutors.句中使用whose引导的定语从句；he shouted at me rudely when I argued with him.句中when引导时间状语从句；Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；另外，make a complaint about，However, What’s worse,等的运用为文章增色添彩。