Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校的交流生Lucy下周打算去老师家做客，但是她不知道中国人做客有哪些传统，她给你发了一封电子邮件，请你给她一些建议。请你依据下列要点，给她回复一封电子邮件。

要点如下：

1.适当地送一些礼物；

2.介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1.词数100左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy,

I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China._____________

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I do hope you will enjoy yourself ill your teacher's home.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I have received your email.You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.Here are some suggestions received by most Chinese.

Firstly,when you visit a Chinese family,you'd better bring some gifts.In China,it is usually considered impolite to visit someone with nothing in hand.So,you can buy some fresh fruits or a box of milk.What's more,table manners are also of great importance.We Chinese like to treat our guests with many delicious dishes.When at table,you should not begin eating first,but follow the host or the senior one.Sometimes,the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions,and you should show your appreciation.

All in all,just as the old saying goes,"When in Rome,do as Romans do."

I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher's home.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是一篇提纲作文。

提纲作文，要求考生根据所给的提示性文字。首先确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想开展。表达主旨。紧紧地围绕中心思想展开论述，表达主旨。但它的限定性较大。我们根据大纲来完成对一个指定事项的说明或者辩论，多以说明文和议论文为主。当然，也不排除一部分文章会出现记叙文。

对于这类文章，审题是关键，涵盖重点，使用名种句型，使用高级词汇和句型这类作文我们的逻辑路径通常是这样的

1、仔细审题，确定主题和文体。然后确定文章的主题、大致内容及文体。

2、总结要点，以每一个要点作为一个段落展开，不能偏离也不能任意增删。

3、提纲是对文章的提示和概括，考生要根据提纲的性质。尽可能地使用复杂句，多种句子结构，高组词汇

4、认真检查，注意格式和书写

本篇作文的亮点：本篇作文层次分明，结构完整，目的明确，表达严谨；能熟练地使用复杂句，多种复合句式使文章主题明确，意义完整。例如：

复杂句：Sometimes, the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation.

动词不定式作宾语：You asked me for some suggestions on how to be a guest in China.

状语从句：when you visit a Chinese family, you'd better bring some gifts

定语从句1：…the host will help you with some dishes, which is different from western traditions。

定语从句2：…as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.”

并列句：…which is different from western traditions, and you should show your appreciation.

运用恰当的连接词firstly，what’s more, all in all。

省略：When（you’re） at table, you should not begin eating first, but follow the host or the senior one.

强调句式：I do hope you will enjoy yourself in your teacher’s home.

谚语：When in Rome, do as Romans do.