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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There is an English saying “It never rains but it pours”. I now believe it was probably true. Last Saturday, I had a terrible time. It was rather cold, or quite sunny, so after lunch I went downtown, plan to buy a sweater. I was looking at the window of clothes shop when someone stole my wallet. While I was going to home, it started to rain and I arrived home coldly and miserable. I decided to have a hot bath. I was getting ready to have my bath while the doorbell rang. It was a salesman and it took me several minute to get rid of him. Unfortunate, all the time he was talking to us, the water was running. You can imagine the state of the bathroom!

Answer 1

【答案】1.第二句：was→is

2.第四句：or→but;

3. plan→planning

4.第五句: of 后加 a

5.第六句：去掉 home 前的 to;

6.coldly→cold

7.第八句: while→when

8.第九句：minute→minutes

9.第十句：Unfortunate→Unfortunately;

10.us→me

【解析】文章主要讲述了

考查系动词。句意：我相信这是真的。根据句中“now”可知应使用一般现在时，故将系动词was改为is。

考查连词。句意：天气很冷，但很晴朗。上下句为转折关系，不是选择，故将连词or改为but。

考查非谓语动词作状语。句意：所以午饭后我去了市中心，打算买一件毛衣。主语为I，与plan处于主谓关系，故使用动名词作状语。故将plan改为planning。

考查冠词用法。句意：当我正在看一家服装店橱窗里的衣服时，有人偷了我的钱包。clothes shop为泛指，故在clothes shop之前加不定冠词a。

考查动词用法。句意：当我回家时，天开始下雨。回家go home，故去掉to。

考查形容词。句意：我回到家时又冷又可怜。形容词作定语，故将coldly改为cold。

考查连词。句意：我正要去洗澡的时候门铃响了。While引导的状语从句中动作为可延续性动作，when引导的状语从句中动作为瞬间动作，根据题意，故将while改为when。

考查名词单复数。句意：他是个推销员，我花了好几分钟才摆脱了他。several修饰可数名词复数，故将minute改为minutes。

考查副词。句意：不幸的是，他一直在和我说话。副词作状语，故将Unfortunate改为Unfortunately。

考查代词。句意：不幸的是，他一直在和我说话。文中只讲到作者一个人，故将代词us改为we。