Question

书面表达（满分30分）

5月1日。高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院（Sunshine

Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100~120个词的新闻报道。

1.  时间、地点、人物、活动；

2.  老人们的反应；

3.  简短评论。

4.  注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

 

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                         By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

 

Answer 1

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参考范文：

Student Volumteers Broutht Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went o Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

By Chen Jie, School Nwespaper

 

【解析】本题题材贴近学生生活，是学生们在社会实践活动中经常参加的活动；体裁命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的半开放提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。写出简评让学生张扬个性，符合探究理念，但表达要有重点，注意把前面整个的活动过程交代清楚，这是写作的重要内容；老人们的反应和简评可以少写。

要写好这篇半开放性作文首先要认真审题，看清要求，分清写作的主次，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，地点、活动的内容，以及老人们的反应表达出来；然后再发表个人观点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理，重点突出。