Question

你在网络上读到一篇关于“九零后”的英语文章，你打算以“Post-90’s Generation”为题，用第一人称给《21世纪英语报》写一篇文章，内容包括：

 

“九零后”的缺点	“九零后”的优点	你自己的感受
依赖性强 自私 贪图过舒适的生活等	渴望了解周围的世界 思想独立 有很多新观念等	……………

 

注意：

必须包括表格中的所有内容；

为了使文章通顺完整，可以适当增加内容；

词数：150左右。

                        Post-90’s Generation

 We, post-90’s generation, are living in a society full of fierce competition,____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Post-90’s Generation

    We, post-90’s generation, are living in a society full of fierce competition, and developing our special manners and values has raised people’ concern.

    It’s true that the post-90’s generation have some weaknesses. Some of us, for example, rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives. Some are even selfish and care little for others.

    At the same time, the post-90’s generation desire to learn more about the world around us, and we are independent in thinking. We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas.

    I think the post-90’s generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses, and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。注意要用第一人称来写。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如It’s true that, rely on, overcome the weaknesses还运用了that引导的宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：At the same time ；and等等。

考点：提纲作文。