Question

【题目】书面表达：暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

	优点	缺点
呆在家中	花费少，舒适方便	不能亲身了解外界
外出旅游	增长见识，开阔眼界	花费多，旅途不便

注意：1. 短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域，词数80~120（不含已写好部分）。

2. 短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表达。

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4. 参考词汇：眼界——horizon（或view）

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

Answer 1

【答案】

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.

However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

【解析】

试题分析：暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。呆在家中优点：花费少，舒适方便；缺点：不能亲身了解外界。外出旅游优点：增长见识，开阔眼界；缺点：花费多，旅途不便。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

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