Question

近年来，住房问题已经成为媒体关注的焦点，如何解决住房问题是许多大城市面临的最严重的问题之一，针对这个问题，人们想出了许多解决的办法，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，具体解决方法如下;

多建高层建筑，可容纳更多的人

向地下发展

在郊区建房子，扩大城市规模，减轻城市人口压力

政府积极出台相应政策，防止房价过高

注意：1. 词数100-120左右；

2．要点齐全，并适当发挥，以使行文流畅

3. 标题已给出

参考词汇：高层建筑—  high-rise apartment         郊区- suburb

The House Problem in Big Cities

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years more and more people in big cities complain that they can’t afford an apartment, People come up with many ideas to solve this problem.

The first suggestion is building more high-rise apartments which can hold more people in the same area. Some people suggested developing underground housing areas which costs less. Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities. Moreover, people are expecting the government to take efficient measures to control the house price.

Anyway, I hope the housing problem will be solved properly in the near future so that more people in big cities will have their own house.

 

【解析】

试题分析：提纲式作文。作文的评分标准中主要有三个方面，一是内容，本题目内容题示较多，重点展示解决住房问题的方法，提示了四个方面，在写作过程中不可提纲式翻译，可适当调整位置以及主次要分明，二是复杂的句型和高级词汇，要注意对复杂结构如倒装，强调等的运用。三是句子，段落之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】作为高考评分标准中的说明有这么一条，在高考作文中要尽量使用高考词汇和复杂句型，Besides, it is a good way to build house in suburbs, thus enlarging the scale of cities and reducing the crowdness of cities.本句中巧妙的使用了It is +adj+to do 固定句型以及thus doing结构，使语言丰富。

结尾表达了作者的希望运用了目的状语从句。

【考点】考查语言表达能力。