阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A former high school teacher who fled his classroom during the massive May 12 earthquake in southwest China has a new job here in a private training school.
Fan Meizhong has a two-year contract with Keyfind Education School in the Haidian District, school spokesman Zhang Wenbin told Xinhua on Wednesday.
The former Chinese language teacher from a private high school in earthquake-hit Dujiangyan City, Sichuan Province, was nicknamed “running Fan” by netizens （网民） after he left his students behind and escaped the classroom as the 8.0-magnitude earthquake struck.
Fan’s behavior became a controversial object, and he was later fired.
Zhang said, however, that Fan had been hired for his extensive teaching experience and talent. At Keyfind, he’ll conduct research on developing students’ potential and raising their interest in learning. He’ll also give some lectures, according to Zhang.
“Fan, as a person, also needs to live,” Zhang said. “We hope the media will be tolerant about Fan and give him some living space. Whether he was wrong or right in his running behavior, we only want to make use of his talent.”
He said the school had not decided what to do next about Fan’s job.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2. 然后以约120个词就“范美忠再被聘为教师”为主题发表你的看法，并包括下列要点：
你是怎样看待范美忠在发生地震时的先跑行为的；
范美忠该不该再聘为教师，为什么？
你心目中的教师该是怎么样的？
【写作要求】
1．作文中可使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容,
但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
( Possible version 1 )
The passage is mainly about the news that Fan Meizhong, once a teacher in Dujiangyan City who left his students behind and ran away during the earthquake, again got employed as a teacher in Beijing.
In my opinion, Fan's behavior deserves scolding. According to our law's morality, any grown-up should have the duty to protect teenagers. Therefore, as a teacher, Fan should have helped his helpless students during the earthquake instead of choosing to run away. Although we can understand that it is the instinct that makes Fan escape from the earthquake, he shouldn’t insist that he was a model to be followed. It’s really a shame.
As a result, I think he is not qualified as a teacher anyway, though we should be a little tolerant to give him a chance. If employed as a teacher, he shall set a bad pattern for others.
In my eyes, a teacher should not only be rich in knowledge but also have noble virtue.
| 项目 | 分值 | 评分标准 |
| 概 括 | 5 | 按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。 |
| 4 | 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。 | |
| 3 | 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。 | |
| 2 | 不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。 | |
| 0-1 | 没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。 | |
| 写 作 | 18-20 | 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。 词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性好。 |
| 14-17 | 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。 词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性较好。 | |
| 11-13 | 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。 词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性较好。 | |
| 7-10 | 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。 词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性一般。 | |
| 4-6 | 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。 词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。 篇章结构的连贯性差。 | |
| 1-3 | 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。 词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。 | |
| 0 | 以下几种情况，给0分： 1）完全抄袭原文（或其它文章） 2）文不对题 3）只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容 |
提分百分百检测卷系列答案科目：高中英语 来源：广东省茂名市2010届高三下学期第二次模拟考试 题型：写作题
第二节：读写任务（共1个小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。
Mr. Rogerson, 51, the father of two girls and two boys, has taught teamowork among his children, with real money. Eight years ago, when they ranged in age from 5 to 13, he and his wife decided to give them $ 5,000 to make investment (投资) each year – for the family’s summer holiday. The more money they made, the more joy they could get on holiday.
In 2001 – a bad year for the stock market (股票市场). “They bought stocks. Their money went down from $ 5,000 to $ 2,000.” Mr. Rogerson said, “We went camping.”
During the second year, “They made $ 50,” he said. “That year we drove down to Florida to visit family.”
By the their year, the children earned $ 600 on their $ 5,000, and the family went to Disney World.
Mr. Rogerson said that the point of the experience – learning to work together to make intelligent decisions about money – is an important one and the effort has helped them discover their own talent. “We found that one boy showed great leadership and the other one was great with numbers,” he said. “Each had a different talent.”
【写作内容】
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中“团队合作”的讨论，你准备写一份发言稿，内容要点包括：
1．以约30个词概括材料中心内容：
2．然后以约120个词就“团队合作”为主题写你的看法，内容包括：
（1）团队合作的重要性，
（2）以你的亲身经历或他人的经历证明团队合作的重要性；
（3）你对团队合作活动的建议。
【写作要求】
1．可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯
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科目：高中英语 来源：2012届广东省广州市禺山高级中学高三第一次月考英语试卷 题型：写作题
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Michael is always in a good mood and always has something positive to say. When someone asks him how he is doing, he will reply, “If I were any better, I’d be twins!”
His style really made me curious, so one day I went up to Michael and asked him, “I don’t get it. You can’t be positive all the time. How do you do it?”
Michael replied, “Each morning I wake up and say to myself, ‘Mike, you can choose to be in a good mood or in a bad mood.’ I choose to be in a good mood. Each time something bad happens, I choose to learn from it. Every time someone comes to me complaining, I choose to point out the positive side of life.”
Then Michael added, “Life is all about choices. When you cut away all the junk, every situation is a choice. You choose how you react to situations. You choose how people will affect your mood. You choose to be in a good mood or bad mood. The bottom line is: It’s your choice how you live your life.” I reflected on what Michael said. And I learn from him that every day we can choose to live fully. Attitude is everything.
【写作内容】
(1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
(2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你或你的朋友遭遇困境的一次经历，并包括以下要点：
①叙述你或你的朋友曾经遭遇的某个困境；
②你或你的朋友是如何对待困难的；
③你或你的朋友的态度对解决问题起了什么作用？
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。
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科目：高中英语 来源：2014届广东深圳高级中学高三上期第一次月考英语卷（解析版） 题型：书面表达
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate decreases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2.然后以约120个词就“努力学习，快乐生活”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：
(1)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？简要阐述理由。
(2)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的？
(3)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
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科目：高中英语 来源：2010年河南省高一下学期期中考试英语 题型：填空题
阅读下面的短文，然后从A-F选项中，为每一小段选择合适的标题, 并把答案写在答案卷上。
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A. The most common problem is a “wandering” mind B. Selective listening is also a mental barrier C. Listening isn’t an easy skill to master D. Attitude can also influence good listening E. Noise and background music makes listening more difficult F. Listening is also related to the level of the listener’s knowledge |
1._____________
Listening is not as easy as someone thought. Even good listeners may recall only fifty percent of what they hear. Retention, the ability to remember and recall information, decreases about twenty to twenty-five percent after a few days. So no matter how well you listen in class, you’re always going to have to refresh your memory before a test! Unfortunately, many people have poor listening habits, and little listening training. To improve your listening skills, it’s important to understand what causes poor listening.
2.___________
If you find it difficult to concentrate solely on what a speaker is saying, there’s a good reason. The mind processes information much faster than a speaker can speak. The brain can process over 500 words per minute, while the average speaker talks at a rate of 124 to 250 words per minute. That means the mind can hear what’s being said and can think about something else at the same time.
3.____________
If you have a negative idea about the speaker or the topic, you’ll find it difficult to listen attentively. Hostile or captive audiences often have more difficultly listening than do favorable or voluntary ones.
4.____________
If a speaker speaks “above the heads” of an audience, people find it difficult to concentrate. Speakers who use unfamiliar words or who use incomplete explanations make it more difficult to listen. Speakers who “speak down” to audiences, failing to acknowledge what the audience already knows, also create mental blocks.
5.___________
When people listen selectively, they simply block out what they don’t want to hear. For instance, many people have habits that are dangerous to their health, like smoking. However, they often choose to block out what a speaker says about health risks. They may listen to a speech and think that the speaker’s message applies to other people, not them. In other words, they hear what they want to hear and ignore what they don’t want to hear.
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科目：高中英语 来源：2010届广东省高三下学期综合测试（三） 题型：书面表达
第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Doctors say anger can be an extremely harmful emotion, unless you learn how to deal with it. They warn that angry feelings can lead to heart disease, stomach
problems, headaches, emotional problems and possibly cancer.
Anger is a normal emotion that we all feel from time to time. Some people
express anger openly in a calm, reasonable way. Others burst with anger, losing
control of themselves. But still other people control their anger. They cannot or will not express it.
Recently some doctors have found that people who express anger too often and
violently become, in fact, more and not less angry. This can cause medical problems.
Some doctors say that both controlling and expressing anger can be dangerous. They
believe that those who express anger strongly may be more likely to develop heart
disease, and they believe that those who deep their anger inside may face a greater
danger of high blood pressure.
Doctors say the solution is learning how to deal with anger. They say the first
step is to admit that you are angry and to recognize the real cause of the anger, then decide if the cause is serious enough to get angry about. If it is, they say, "Do not express your anger while angry. Wait until your anger has cooled down and you are able to express yourself calmly and reasonably. "
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括这段短文内容；
2、然后以约120个词就“生气不好”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：
(1)发脾气的害处；
(2)遇到不愉快的事儿时，如何避免生气；
(3)生气时，如何恰当宣泄情绪。
【写作要求】
1、可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；
2、作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
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