Question

你是校报英语版编辑Jack Smith，主要负责“你问我答”专栏，请就中学生李华的来信作答，给出适当建议。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m a Senior 3 student. I have to take English exams every two weeks. But the results are always discouraging in spite of my great efforts. I don't know why. I 'm afraid something is wrong with my English learning method. What’s worse, before each exam, I'm always feeling nervous and cannot sleep well. Could you give me some suggestions?

                                                                               Li Hua

注意：

针对提出问题，给出信息完整的建议；

适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

词数：100左右。开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people.

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Sincerely yours,

Jack Smith

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Dear li Hua.

  I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be chanllenging for some people. However , there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

  Firstly , obtain as large a vocabulary as possible .It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect .Therefore , doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing .In this way you are sure to improve your English.

  As for examination anxiety , it’s unnecessary for you to wok too late before the exam .Instead , you ‘d better go to bed earlier than usual , otherwise you would feel tired the next day . It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep .In addition , consult your teachers if necessary .

  I do hope my advice is helpful to you .

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求就中学生李华的来信做出答复，给出适当建议。写作前必须认真阅读来信，弄清信中提出的问题，以便提出针对性建议。此封来信中提出了两个问题，一是英语学习方面遇到的问题，而是考前的紧张，所以在回信中要围绕这两方面作答。此外，在时态选择上要使用一般现在时来表述建议。而且也要注意运用多样化的句式和句法结构，以提高文章档次。

【亮点说明】本篇范文在结构安排上采用三段式，首段提出写信的目的，其他两段分别就如何提高英语成绩和消除考前恐惧症给出建议，这样的安排使得文章结构清晰、层次分明。此外文中however、therefore、instead、otherwise等副词和短语in addition、in this way的使用也有效地起到承接上下文的作用，使范文行文连贯、逻辑性强。

考点：考查提纲作文。