Question

【题目】几个月以来，全国人民都投入到新冠肺炎疫情防控阻击战中。假定你是晨光中学的李 津，获悉21世纪英文报正在组织以“A Touching Figure in My Heart”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文：

(1)疫情爆发期间最令你感动的人物或是群体；

(2)令你感动的理由；

(3)最想跟他/她或这个群体说的话。

注意：

(1)词数不少于120；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

参考词汇：流行病；(迅速的)泛滥、蔓延epidemic

新型冠状病毒 novel corona-virus / Covid-19

A Touching Figure in My Heart

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Answer 1

【答案】A Touching Figure in My Heart

With the joint efforts, the epidemic situation is not only under control but is taking a tum for the better as well. What touched me most is that health care staff in other provinces were sent to support Wuhan with lots of donation.

During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescued those infected. It is also you who made us build up our confidence to defeat it. Whenever the patients are confronted with serious condition or pessimistic emotions, you are always ready to help them out and cheer them up weaning inspiring smiles.

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks. But for your selfless devotion, we couldn’t have made such great breakthroughs in the campaign against the disease. I’m definitely convinced that with our effective measures, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，几个月以来，全国人民都投入到新冠肺炎疫情防控阻击战中。假定你是晨光中学的李 津，获悉21世纪英文报正在组织以“A Touching Figure in My Heart”为主题的征文活 动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文：(1)疫情爆发期间最令你感动的人物或是群体；(2)令你感动的理由；(3)最想跟他/她或这个群体说的话。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：under control; take a tum; health care staff; support; regardless of; potential risk; build up; be confronted with; cheer up; words fail me; but for; devotion; make great breakthroughs等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。