假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下面画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My feelings about science have changed．I never used to liking science，but last year I changed schools，and the science teachers at my new school are excellent．The laboratories what have the latest equipments are very good．Our chemistry teacher，Mr．Longford，takes us to public science lectures about four times a term．They are always very interesting，because the lecturers are people who have made really discoveries in his area of science．In fact，Canada has many first-class scientists．In the last twenty years，seven Canadian scientists won the Nobel Prize!The Nobel Prize is a highest scientific prize in the world，so we should be very proud in that．Become more and more interested in physics，I have been decided to study it at the university．

分析在我转学后，我开始对理科产生了浓厚的兴趣．因为这个学校的理科老师非常优秀，实验设施非常好，实验室也都配备了最新的设备．我们老师还经常带我们去听报告，这些做报告的都是真正在科学领域有所建树．由于对物理越来越感兴趣，这使得我决定大学要学习物理．

解答 My feelings about science have changed．I never used to liking science，but last year I changed schools，and the science teachers at my new school are excellent．The laboratories what have the latest equipments are very good．Our chemistry teacher，Mr．Longford，takes us to public science lectures about four times a term．They are always very interesting，because the lecturers are people who have made really discoveries in his area of science．In fact，Canada has many first-class scientists．In the last twenty years，seven Canadian scientists∧won the Nobel Prize!The Nobel Prize is a highest scientific prize in the world，so we should be very proud in that．Become more and more interested in physics，I have been decided to study it at the university．
详解：
1．liking改为like；考查动词，used to do 是固定短语，意为"过去常常做"．
2．what改为that/which；考查关系代词，分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词为The laboratories，故用关系代词that/which指代先行词做从句的主语．
3．really改为real；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词discoveries．
4．his改为their；考查形容词性物主代词，此处物主代词要与主语the lecturers保持一致，故用复数形式their．
5．won前面加have；考查动词的时态，由时间状语In the last twenty years可知本句要与现在完成时，故在won前面加have构成现在完成时．
6．a改为the；考查冠词，形容词的最高级形式highest前面要加定冠词the．
7．in改为of；考查介词，be proud of 是固定短语，意为"以…为骄傲"．
8．Become改为Becoming；考查分词作状语，主语I与动词become之间是主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．
9．去掉been；考查动词的语态，主语I 与动词decide是主谓关系，不能用被动语态，故把been去掉．

点评短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．

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