Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想来中国旅行，他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。

建议理由：

1.便捷、准点；

2.舒适、安全；

3.购票方便、价格适宜。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：中国高铁 CRH (China Railway High-speed)；自助售票机 self-service ticket machine

Dear Peter,

I’m expecting you to come to China. _________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter，

I’m expecting you to come to China. When you arrive in Beijing, you’d better take the CRH train, which have been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.

It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to go. The CRH trains are spacious, comfortable and run at high speed. They arrive on schedule and guarantee the safety of travelers. It’s easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are reasonable. It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文属于应用文，同时也是提纲类作文。整体难度较小，要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Peter回信，因为他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐高铁。建议理由：便捷、准点；舒适、安全；购票方便、价格适宜。写作时文章使用一般现在时态和第三人称为主的时态。切记不要逐句翻译，在各个要点之间适当添加串联成分，让文章更流畅。

【亮点说明】

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