Question

【题目】假设你是李华，一名高三学生，在网络上看到一所国外大学的招生信息 (admission information)，该大学对中国学生开设30多个专业，你对此非常感兴趣，打算用英语撰写一份个人申请，主要内容包括：

1．想申请的专业；

2．个人优势；

3．进入大学后的设想。

注意：1.词数：100左右；

2．书信格式已给出；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam，

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Yours Sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear_Sir_or_Madam，

I have recently noticed the admission information of your university on the Internet.I'm writing to apply for management among all the majors offered to us Chinese students.

For one thing，I do well in English and it will be easy for me to complete the courses in your university.For another，I have been the monitor during my school years，which has promoted my organizing ability.Having organized a few school activities successfully，I'm determined to be a manager as my dream job.Therefore，my plan is to join the Students' Union and participate in some meaningful social activities to learn some advanced management experience.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours_Sincerely，

Li_Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章要求写一篇个人申请，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。