Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter近期打算来中国，他对中国的乡村生活很感兴趣。

你打算邀请他去体验一下你家乡的“农家乐”。请用英文写封信向他推荐，要点如下：

1．“农家乐”兴起的原因；

2．“农家乐”的服务特色。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：农家乐agritainment

Dear Peter,

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Yours．

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter，

It’s great to learn that you’re coming to China to experience the country life. The “agritainment”, a kind of farm-based tourism,is now very popular in my hometown and I think it should be a must for you to experience after your arrival.

As more people from cities are fed up with crowds,noise and traffic jams, they’re trying hard to get closer to nature. However, few people can afford a long holiday in terms of time and money.

As a result, “agritainment”catches on, which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment. If you take the “agritainment”, you can enjoy not just local food, country views, but some hands-on activities as well.

I’m sure you will have a pleasant stay in my hometown.

Looking forward to your coming.

Yours．

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息和图表说明来介绍小区的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照方位顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It’s great to learn that you’re coming to China to experience the country life.是it作形式主语。If you take the “agritainment”, you can enjoy not just local food, country views.是if引导的条件状语从句，还有非限制性定语从句As a result, “agritainment”catches on, which provides people with great relaxation and enjoyment.状语As a result的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。