Question

16．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Betty想知道中国野生动物保护的情况．你准备给她写一封e-mail，向她介绍中国的爱鸟周（Bird-loving Week），内容要点如下：
1．从1982年 起每年的4月至5月初的某一个星期为"爱鸟周"；
2．我国现有鸟类1300多种，其中有一些是珍稀种类；越来越多的人认识到鸟类是大自然的重要组成部分，需要人类的保护；
3．现在许多青少年也加入到这项活动中，争做志愿者，向人们宣传爱鸟的重要性．
    注意：1．词数100左右；
          2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
          3．珍稀 rare      种类 species 
Dear Betty，
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours，
                                                                Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In your e-mail，you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China．在你的邮件里，你说你想知道一些在中国对于野生动物的保护的事．
分句型二：
There are more than 1，300 species of birds in China，some of which are rare．在中国有超过1300种鸟类，其中有一些很稀有．
句型一 you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China  该句中有一个由that引导的宾语从句，that在句中不作句子成分
句型二   some of which are rare  该句是一个介词+关系词 类型的定语从句，该句中的of表所属关系，which替代前面的先行词birds

解答 Dear Betty，
    In your e-mail，you said that you wanted to know something about wildlife protection in China．（高分句型一） Do you know Bird-loving Week？Bird-loving Week has been held in a week in April or early May since 1982．There are more than 1，300 species of birds in China，some of which are rare．（描述现状）（高分句型二）Now more and more people realize that birds are an important part of nature and we need to protect them．Many students also join in the activity and become volunteers．They have public talks about birds，and tell people the importance of bird protection．I know you are a volunteer in a wildlife protection organization．I'd love to share your own experience there．
    I'm looking forward to your reply．
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．