Question

2．假如你是高一学生王刚，在放寒假之前你想写一封信给你的英文老师Mrs．Zhou．
信的内容应包括以下几个方面：
1）Mrs．Zhou的课堂生动有趣，自己进步很大；
2）自己在学习中的困难；
3）给老师的教学建议（至少两条）；
注意：1）不要逐条翻译；
2）字数为120左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3）不得使用真实姓名．
Dear Mrs．Zhou，
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year．
                                           
Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Wang Gang．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇英文书信，写一封信给你的英文老师Mrs．Chen．信的开头结尾都已经给出了，只要写好正文，正文的内容是：1）Mrs．Chen的课堂生动有趣，自己进步很大； 2）自己在学习中的困难；3）给老师的教学建议（至少两条）；写信与写文章一样，要分段写，每段有一个中心思想，内容要表达清楚，语言要简单明了，态度要诚恳礼貌．给亲友的信还应亲切热情．考试时必须把规定的内容写清楚．正文结束时，还可写一两句表达心愿的话，如：Best wishes to you/Remember me to your family/Hoping to hear from you soon等．

解答 Dear Mrs．Chen，
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year．
To begin with，I want to say thanks to you for your hard work．（高分句型）Besides，we all enjoy your lively and interesting class．And with your help，we have made such great progress in English．（高分句型）
To be honest，I still have some puzzles．I can't keep so many new words in mind and don't know how to use them correctly．What's more，grammar is a big problem to me．（高分句型）I often mix up its rules．Would you please help me with these problems？
Mrs．Chen，as we hope to improve our listening ability，could you please speak more English in Class？（高分句型）And we can't bear so much homework of all the subjects，so would you please reduce the amount of English homework？
Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Wang Gang

点评 写作正文时就和写提纲作文一样，要点不能省略，要完全包括在内．要注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇和短语，也可以使用不同的句式．