Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有5处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

As we all know, everyone has a dream. Since I enter the primary school I have dreamed of being a doctor. Nowadays with our modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kinds of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will do whatever I can to keep everyone healthy. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll pay more attention to studies. After all, only by working hard can one succeed.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】enter改为entered

【2】go改为going

【3】become后面加a

【4】去掉but

【5】me改为myself

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】enter改为entered 考查时态。句意：自从我进入小学，我一直梦想成为一名医生。我上小学是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时。

【2】go改为going 考查非谓语动词。本句中介词with后面使用了复合结构，with的宾语our modern life与动词go构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词充当宾语补足语。

【3】become后面加a 考查冠词。动词become成为后面的职业前面通常要接不定冠词a/an。如become a teacher=turn teacher。

【4】去掉but 考查连词。连词although和but是不能连用的，因为although是一个从属连词，要连接从句，而but是一个并列连词，要连接并列句。

【5】me改为myself考查反身代词。本句中使用反身代词表示强调。句意：为了让我的梦想成真，我一次又一次告诉我自己要多注意学习。