Question

15．假设你是英语科代表，请根据以下提示，口头通知你班美国学生参加学校举办的一次讲座．
1．时间：周三下午4点；
2．地点：图书馆；
3．内容：清华大学教授唐文方介绍中美文化差异；演讲后可以和唐教授交谈，介绍你在中国的经历，有对中国文化不理解的问题可以询问唐教授；
4．提示：准时到场．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Boys and girls，
May I have your attention，please？
                                                                            
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息和所给开头，口头通知你班美国学生参加学校举办的一次讲座．写作要点包括1．时间：周三下午4点；2．地点：图书馆；3．内容：清华大学教授唐文方介绍中美文化差异；演讲后可以和唐教授交谈，介绍你在中国的经历，有对中国文化不理解的问题可以询问唐教授；4．提示：准时到场．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重要词汇：be honored to（很荣幸能做某事）； cultural differences （文化差异）； between…and （在…和…之间）；share（分享）；puzzle（使…困惑）；communicate with （与…沟通交流）； on time（按时）
高分句型：1．①Having been studying cultural differences in Qinghua University for many years，Mr．Tang will talk about the differences between American and Chinese cultures，②which may be quite an interesting topic．
                 ①现在分词短语在句中作状语；②关系代词which引导一个非限制性定语从句．
                 2．①Since you have stayed in China for half a year，②if you have anything that puzzles you，it would be great to talk with Mr．Tang．
                   ①since在这里引导一个原因状语从句；②if you have anything that puzzles you在这里做插入语，起到补充说明的作用

解答 Boys and girls，
May I have your attention，please？
There will be a lecture in our library at 4：00 on Wednesday afternoon．We are much honored to have invited Professor Tang Wenfang to give you the lecture．Having been studying cultural differences in Qinghua University for many years，Mr．Tang will talk about the differences between American and Chinese cultures，which may be quite an interesting topic（高分句型一）．After the lecture，you're welcome to share your experiences in China with everyone else present．Since you have stayed in China for half a year，if you have anything that puzzles you，it would be great to talk with Mr．Tang（高分句型二）．He will be glad to communicate with you．Please be present on time．
That's all．Thank you．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．