Question

科学技术在日新月异地发展，它们在人们生活中的应用越来越广泛，但是也带来了一些问题。结合下面的图画，谈谈科学技术给人们造成的影响。

       注意：

1．词数：100—120词左右。

2．开头已为你写好，不计入词数。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

From the above pictures, we can see the following scene.

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Form the above pictures, we can see the following scene: in the past when father came back from work and stepped into the house, his wife would bring him a cup of hot coffee and his little son used to happily greet him with “Daddy”, and his daughter would throw away her book to welcome him, which made him glad and also “Hi” to them happily.

But now when father gets home, he finds that his son is addicted to playing computer games and his daughter is busy phoning her friends and his wife is absorbed in watching TV series. Everyone is doing something and cares nothing about his return. The father doesn’t become angry because he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone.

What the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is beginning to influence the relationship between family members, who seem to have no time communicating with each other.

解析:

本文应包括以下写作要点：

1．本文的命题形式我汉语提示和两幅图画，夹叙夹议。

2．确定第一幅图用一般过去时，第二幅图用一般现在时。用第三人称叙述。

3．第一幅图的内容：过去爸爸下班回家的时候，妈妈递上一杯热咖啡，儿子高兴地喊“爸爸”，女儿放下手头的书也问候爸爸。

4．第二幅图的内容：现在爸爸下班回家的时候，儿子沉迷于上网玩游戏，女儿在煲电话粥，妈妈在看电视剧，而爸爸自己也在边走边用手机和人通电话。