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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position among China’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

Answer 1

【答案】1. his→whose

2. owned→owns

3. rich→richest

4. Fought→Fighting

5. 去掉in

6. he和introduced 之间加上was

7. before→when/after

8. in→ on

9. obvious→obviously

10. all→ both

【解析】1. 构造的非限制性定语从句中用关系代词whose，指代上文 Jack Ma的。故his→whose。

2. 考察时态。'马云拥有这21.1亿中的百分之六'，是客观事实，所以用一般现在时第三人称单数。故owned→owns。

3.句意：但是他仍然在世界10大富翁之外。这里应该用最高级，表示世界上最富有的10个人，故rich→richest。

4. 现在分词作状语，动词fight和主语 Ma是主动关系。故Fought→Fighting。

5. 关系代词which指代先行词a translation agency，在定语从句中做主语，故去掉in。

6. 主语he和动词introduce是被动关系。故he和introduced 之间加上was。

7. 句意：当他偶然地被任命带美国游客 Jerry Yang参观长城时/之后，他的命运注定要改变。根据句意可知before→when/after。

8. 考察固定搭配。take sb on a tour 带某人去参观。故in→ on。

9. 句意：很明显这次会面对于他们都是转折点。这里应该用副词obviously修饰句子。故obvious→obviously。

10. 句意：很明显这次会面对于他们两位都是转折点。根据上文可知是两个人见面，代词应该用both，故all→ both。