Question

【题目】假定你是李华，今年十月份即将去英国的布莱顿大学（Brighton University)留学。请给你在布莱顿的网友Tom写一封英文电子邮件，让他介绍一下布莱顿这座城市，告知他你的租房需求并请他帮忙租房子。

注意1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you that we’ll meet each other soon because I’ll start my study in Brighton University this October.

To make my stay there more comfortable,I wonder if you could do me a favor. First, I need to have a clear idea of the city of Brighton in advance, so would you please give me a brief introduction to it? Second, I want to live off campus while studying there. Therefore, could you please help me rent a one-bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom?

Looking forward to your early reply!

Your,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般将来时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅。3.注意语气。语气应该比较恳切，有说服力。难点是说出自己的租房需求，这一点最好有具体的例子做支撑，否则内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】1. I’m writing to tell you that we’ll meet each other soon because I’ll start my study in Brighton University this October..我写信给你是要告诉你我们要很快见面了，因为我今年十月要开始在布莱顿大学的学习。（首先是be writing to do句型的运用，其次是采用了以that宾语从句和原因状语从句连接的并列句）

2. To make my stay there more comfortable, I wonder if you could do me a favor.为了使我在那里住得更舒服些，我想知道是否你能帮我个忙。（首先采用了非谓语动词表示目的, 以及高级词汇do me a favor的使用，最后使用了以I wonder if开头的复合句）