第一节:短文改错(共1小题,每小题2分.满分2分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．第一节：短文改错（共1小题；每小题2分，满分2分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
July 8th，2015
We are going camping on Yulong mountain on next weekend．There are six peoples in our group．We will got together at our school gate at 8：00in Saturday．We will start to climb the mountain at 8：30but get to the top at 10：00am．Then we would have lunch at the top of the mountain．After lunch，we will arrange some free activities，such as singing，dance and game playing．We will return at 5：00pm．In order to having a good time，every member of our group must prepare necessities by yourself，such as waters，food，and so on．I believe we are going to have happy day．

分析本文写了一则下周末爬山的通知．六个人一个小组，星期六八点半在学校大门口集合，详细地通知了时间安排以及注意事项，

解答 1 July 8th，2015
We are going camping on Yulong mountain on next weekend．There are six peoples in our group．We will got together at our school gate at 8：00in Saturday．We will start to climb the mountain at 8：30but get to the top at 10：00am．Then we would have lunch at the top of the mountain．After lunch，we will arrange some free activities，such as singing，dance and game playing．We will return at 5：00pm．In order to having a good time，every member of our group must prepare necessities by yourself，such as waters，food，and so on．I believe we are going to have∧happy day．
详解：
1．去掉on．考查介词，下个周末的英文表达是next week，介词on是多余的，所以去掉．
2．peoples改成people．．考查名词，people是一个单复数同型的单词，"六个人"的表达是six people，不需要加s．
3．got 改成get．考查时态，根据句意"我们会在大门口聚集"，will后面跟动词的原形表示将来时，got是get的过去时，所以把got改成get．
4．on改成in．考查介词，具体到某一天要用介词on，在星期六要用介词on，所以把in改成on．
5．but改成and．考查连词，根据句意"我们打算在八点半爬山十点到达山顶"，start to climb 与get to the top 是一对并列谓语，所以用and 连接，所以把but 改成and．
6．would 改成will．考查情态动词，本文的描述用的都是将来时，would用于过去将来时，根据句意"然后我们吃午餐"，应该用一般将来时，所以把would改成will．
7．dance改成dancing．考查非谓语，such as 列举的是some free activities，所以动词要用动名词形式，singing，dancing，game playing是并列的，所以把dance 改成dancing．
8．having改成have．考查非谓语，in order to do 是固定搭配"为了做某事"，其中动词不定时to 后跟动词原形，所以把having改成have．
9．waters改成water．考查名词，water是一个不可数名词，本句中的水是不可数名词，所以把waters改成water．
10．加a．考查冠词，have a happy day是度过愉快的一天，所以在have与happy之间加a．

点评短文改错考查涉及面广，但却有所侧重．考查点测试频率最高的是动词，涉及动词考查的有时态、语态、非谓语动词形式、情态动词和动词的用法等．此外，还考查名词、介词、代词、冠词、形容词、副词、连词等，还涉及到句型结构、行文逻辑、固定搭配等．

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