Question

【题目】你身边很多同学视力低下，需戴近视眼镜。请就这一现象写一篇英语课前演讲稿，内容包括以下方面：1. 目前同学的视力状况 2. 青少年视力低下的主要原因 3. 保护视力的建议

注意：

1. 词数120左右，开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）

2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

参考词汇： vision视力 short-sighted 近视眼（的）

Dear classmates, have you noticed the phenomenon that____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear classmates, Have you noticed the phenomena that more and more teenagers around us wear glasses? Some of them got short-sighted even at a very young age. This is because they don’t get a good habit of reading or they overuse their eyes watching TV or playing computer games.

But how to protect our vision? What can we do for good eyesight? Perhaps there are some ways for me to keep good vision, however, taking regular outdoor activities is an evident solution. Secondly, eye-care exercises twice a day may not be neglected. Having a distant look at intervals during the class break is equally important. In addition, don’t read in light which is either too dim or too bright. Don’t read in the bed or in a moving car.

It is high time that we took quick actions to protect our vision!
Thank you!

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求写一篇英语课前演讲稿，内容包括以下方面：1. 目前同学的视力状况；2. 青少年视力低下的主要原因；3. 保护视力的建议。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了表语从句This is because they don’t get a good habit of reading or they overuse their eyes watching TV or playing computer games.和定语从句In addition, don’t read in light which is either too dim or too bright.以及It is high time that句型等。