Question

【题目】假如你是李华，是某中学高一的新生。请你给以前的好朋友小明写封信。介绍你现在各方面的情况。信中包括以下内容：

1．学校环境优美，操场大，树木成荫。

2．老师要求严格，生活中很友好，关心同学。

3．同学都很优秀，很勤奋。彼此相处融洽。

4．高中生活充满压力，但是在老师的帮助下，我充满信心，一定会不断取得进步。

注意：1. 内容应包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使文章连贯；

2. 开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 词数：100左右。

3.不要在文中出现真实姓名和班级。参考词汇：压力 stress

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school.

Our school is very beautiful with a big playground. There are green trees and all kinds of sweet flowers all the year round. The teachers are very strict with us in study, but after class, they are friendly and care about us very much. My new classmates are all very excellent and always working very hard. They help me a lot in study as well as in mydaily life and we are getting along with each other quite well.

Stressful as the school life is, I am full of confidence. I think with the help of my teachers, I will make progress.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是要求给以前的好朋友小明写封信。介绍你进入高一的各方面的情况。文章给出了汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：There br结构：There are green trees and all kinds of sweet flowers all the year round.； 倒装句：Stressful as the school life is, I am full of confidence. ；be always doing 总是做某事（进行时表现在）My new classmates are all very excellent and always working very hard. 2.使用了重要短语：strict with对…严格；care about关心；as well as以及；get along with相处；with the help of在…的帮助下；make progress取得进步。