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7．健康之重要人尽皆知．许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚．长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏．导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往． 简述你的看法，提出你的建议．
词数120左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数．
Have a healthy lifestyle
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分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life．
只有当我们健康我们可以好好学习，享受生活．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out，which may have a bad effect on their mental health．
三、他们将失去机会与他人面对面为他们从不去沟通，这可能对他们的心理健康有不良影响．

解答 Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know，health is very important．Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life（高分句型一）．
However，many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health，especially during the holiday．And they spend too much time watching TV，playing games and chatting on the Internet all night，which is bad for their health．First，this may make them get near-sighted．Besides，their bodies become much weaker．Thirdly，they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out，which may have a bad effect on their mental health（高分句型二）．
In my opinion，they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer．Go out to take some exercises，play some sports and visit some and have a healthy lifestyle．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．