Question

【题目】假如你叫Tom，寒假期间你要去英国Midwood High School进行学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读课表，按要求给校方回复一封信。

Schedule for Summer English Courses
English Courses	Total Hours of Study	Total Hours of Part-time Job	Date
Three-week course	120	48	Feb. 1 — Feb. 24
Two-week course	60	No Job but Tour Instead	Feb. 25 — Mar.7

Please include the following:

1. Your choice of the courses and possible reasons

2. Your present English level

3. Specific language skill you hope to improve

4. Other requirements

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1．开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

2．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

2. 词数：150左右

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your inviting me to the summer English course in your school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your inviting me to the winter English course in your school. As for my choice between the two courses, I’m more likely to choose the two-week course for 60 hours of study. This will allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I would like to do some traveling and make a few new friends.

Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I have been learning English for 6 years and now I am able to listen, speak, read and write in English. I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible. At the same time, I’d like to have home-stay for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs. I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this winter.

Best wishes.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。寒假期间你要去英国Midwood High School进行学习。根据英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表，给校方回复一封信。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇书信，格式正确，要点包括齐全，文章结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。This will allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language.动词不定式和现在分词用在句中；Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, 运用定语从句；I have been learning English for 6 years句中使用现在完成进行时态；I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible.动词不定式在句中做宾语和后置定语；I’d like to have home-stay for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs.so that引导目的状语从句；I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this winter.省略that的宾语从句；另外，As for，as much as possible，At the same time,等的运用为文章增色添彩。