Question

【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A college graduate was new in the job and she found something really strange. One of her colleague was a lazy man, who usually played his digital camera or listen to music during working time. To her surprised, the boss never blamed him because his behavior.
One day, her colleague was listening to the music while the boss came and said serious, “the host computer has something wrong.” The colleague rushed to the controlling center to solving the problem and began to fix them silently. Twenty minutes later, and the host computer reworked normally. Then the graduate realized the economic loss what her colleague had saved this time must have been hundreds of his salary.

Answer 1

【答案】①colleague – colleagues ②listen - listened ③surprised- surprise ④because后加of ⑤while-when ⑥serious-seriously ⑦solving- solve ⑧them -it ⑨and 去掉 ⑩ what – that/which

【解析】本文属于记叙文，介绍了公司里一个喜欢玩相机听音乐的员工帮助老板修好电脑服务器的小故事。

①考查名词单复数。短语"one of....."意为“....之一”，后面要接可数名词复数形式，所以本句使用复数名词colleagues。

②考查时态。本句中动词played his digital camera与listened to music是并列关系，都在句中做谓语动词，所以都要使用一般过去式.

③考查固定短语。名词surprise作为介词to的宾语构成介词短语to one's surprise让某人惊讶的是。

④考查固定搭配。连词because的后面要接句子表示原因，介词短语because of后面要接名词或名词短语表示原因，本句中his behavior是名词短语，所以要使用介词短语because of。

⑤考查固定句式。句式be doing sth when....正在做某事在这时.....；其中的when是并列连词，意为“在那时.....”，其后面的从句表示意料之外的事情。

⑥考查副词。在英语中副词通常做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词，形容词通常做定语或表语修饰名词。本句中副词seriously在句中做状语修饰动词said。

⑦考查不定式。本句中不定式短语to solve the problem在句中做目的状语。

⑧考查代词。本句中代词it指代上文提及的同一事物the host computer，表示特指。

⑨考查句子结构。本句是一个单独的单句，没有和其他句子构成任何关系，所以原句中的and是多余的。句意：20分钟以后，服务器恢复正常了。

⑩考查定语从句。本句中定语从句的先行词是the economic loss，关系代词that/which指代先行词在句中作为动词save的宾语，可以省略。