Question

 

进入高中已经一个月了，你对你身边的学习和生活环境由陌生到熟悉，请根据下文提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何安排你接下来的高中生活，内容应包括： 1. 确定新的学习目标 2. 改进学习方法 3. 学会独立的生活 4. 参加各种课外活动 5. 处理好与同学的关系 注意： 1. 短文的内容要连贯，完整 2. 短文单词数100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数） In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school. In the following days, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at school. I think I will have a wonderful senior high school life.

【解析】

本文属于给出汉语提示的半开放性的写作。

1）审题：结合本篇作文的提示与写作要求，确定以下审题确定以下内容： ?  

①文体：描写性 ②时态：主要用一般将来时 ③人称：第一人称(I) ④要点：见题目要求

2）拟草稿：根据审题情况，主要步骤如下：①怎么开头？（要突出主题，启引下文，常写1—2句）：

In the past month, my life has changed a lot since I started my senior high school. In the following days, I plan to?   ②怎么罗列要点？注意适当合并要点。

③怎么结尾？（根据文章内容的需要，一般1—2句）： ?   

I think I will have a wonderful senior high school life.

④怎么连句成文？注意行文逻辑上下连贯。注意恰当运用连接词，并适当使用一些高级词汇和句式。