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4．上周一，一个福建医学院大学的李教授针对"青少年意外伤害自救能力的现状与建议"做了一次两个小时的报告．请根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文：
（1）意外伤害的发生呈逐年上升的趋势．在中国，每年约有20万少年儿童死于意外伤害．意外伤害已经成为青少年健康的"第一杀手"；
（2）青少年对急救知识缺乏了解；
（3）建议加强青少年对意外伤害急救的教育．
注意：
（1）词数100-120；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
（3）参考词汇：医科大学 Medical University；意外伤害accidental injury；自救self rescue
Last Monday，Professor Li from Fujian Medical University gave us a report on teenagers'accidental injury and self rescue．The report lasted two hours．
Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year．In China，about 200，000 children die of accidental injury each year．Accidental injury has become the leading cause of death for teenagers．However，most teenagers lack the basic knowledge of first aid．In fact a knowledge of first aid can really make a real difference．
At the end of the report，Professor Li called on us to realize the importance of gaining the first aid knowledge．He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid．．

Answer 1

分析 本文为报告，报告主题为：青少年意外伤害自救能力的现状与建议．
写作要点为：（1）意外伤害的发生呈逐年上升的趋势．在中国，每年约有20万少年儿童死于意外伤害．意外伤害已经成为青少年健康的"第一杀手"；
（2）青少年对急救知识缺乏了解；
（3）建议加强青少年对意外伤害急救的教育．

解答 Last Monday，Professor Li from Fujian Medical University gave us a report on teenagers'accidental injury and self rescue．The report lasted two hours．
Professor Li said that the rate of accidental injury is increasing year by year．In China，about 200，000 children die of accidental injury each year．Accidental injury has become the leading cause of death for teenagers．However，most teenagers lack the basic knowledge of first aid．In fact a knowledge of first aid can really make a real difference．
At the end of the report，Professor Li called on us to realize the importance of gaining the first aid knowledge．He said that it was high time that we teenagers received education on first aid．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．