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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单间的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Li Hua,

I am honored that you would ask me for some advices. As you know, our band was formed in a very unusual way. However, we learned a lot about be a band since then.

First, you should think careful about what kind of music you want to write and play. You had better play one kind of music if you want to become famous. Next, you can come up to a name for your band—something which is different. Then, make a special time for practicing but stick to it. I will also need to give several performances for friends and family to get their ideas on your musical ability.

Above all, just have a fun. I believe it will be an amazed experience for you.

Yours Sincerely,

Freddy

Answer 1

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【解析】1.advice是不可数名词，故把advices---advice。

2.根据since then.可知句子用现在完成时态，主语是we，故在we后加have。

3.介词后跟动名词，故把about后的be---being。

4.副词修饰动词，故把careful---carefully。

5.句意：你能为你的乐队想出一个名字。come up with想出，提出，故把to---with。

6. something做先行词，后面的定语从句用that引导，故把which---that。

7.句意：制定一个特殊的练习时间并坚持。此处表示一种并列的递进关系，故把but---and。

8.根据上文可知，本文用的是第二人称，意思是：你还需要为朋友和家人表演几场。故把I---You.

9.fun是不可数名词，故把have a fun中的a去掉。

10.句意：这对你来说是一次令人惊讶的经历。故把amazed--- amazing.