Question

7．2015年9月份，你被录取（be admitted to）到连江二中（No.2 Middle School of Lianjiang County），已经经历了2个多月的学习生活．以My New School Life为题谈谈自己对学校，学习，同学，老师，今后理想等看法和想法．字数120字左右．

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分析 本题属于开放类作文，本文要求考生以My New School Life为题谈谈自己对学校，学习，同学，老师，今后理想等看法和想法． 需要使用高级词汇以及高级句式，另外还需要合适的连接词连接所有要点．
【名师点睛】这篇范文属于作文中较好的一篇．在写作的过程中，作者使用了合适的连接词first of all，secondly，besides以及finally把四个要点串联成文．同时也使用了较多的高级句式，如形式宾语句I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit，make full use of time and work harder than ever before．非限制性定语从句Besides，more new trees have been planted recently，which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study．强调句I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates．这些高级句式的运用让文章文采斐然．

解答 I'm very lucky to be admitted into No.2 Middle School of Lianjiang County．After two months study here，I gradually adapt to the life in high school and have learned a lot．
    First of all，I find it much more necessary to develop a good learning habit，make full use of time and work harder than ever before．（高分句型一）Secondly，I have joined the English Club since a lot of clubs have been set up in my school not only because I want to learn English well with all my heart but I also feel it a great opportunity to make more friends．（高分句型二）Besides，more new trees have been planted recently，which makes our school more beautiful and a better place to study．（高分句型三）Finally，although at present I have some worries，I do feel hopeful about my future because of the help of my kind teachers and classmates．（115words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．