Question

11．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
I'd like to share an experience with you in which I was misunderstood in the beginning．It happened on my way to school last Monday．I was riding to school when I heard a sharp call for help all of a sudden．Following the voice，I caught sight of a girl struggling helplessly in the river．Without a moment's hesitation，I hurriedly got off my bike，took off my clothes and jumped into the river．After a few minutes'efforts，I managed to pull the girl up eventually．Afterwards，I informed the girl's parents of the accident and then continued to head for school．But I was still late for class．Not knowing the truth，the teacher criticized me severely for missing the class．
In the very afternoon，the girl's parents came to my school and thanked me for saving their daughter．Having learned the whole story，my teacher made an apology to me sincerely and appealed to all my classmates to learn from me．
写作内容
1．以约30个词概括短文主要内容；
2．以约120个词就"被误解"这个主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：
（1）你对原文作者救人行为的评价；
（2）举一个你或你的朋友被别人误解的例子；
（3）在日常生活中，被朋友误解时，你觉得应该怎么办？
写作要求
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．写作内容中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．
The author saved a girl from drowning on his way to school and thus was late for school，for which he was criticized．Later，the teacher apologized for misunderstanding him．（概括）
I really think highly of the author，who rescued the girl regardless of his own safety【高分句型一】．He sets a good example to us and is truly worth learning from．（评价）
Like the author，I was once misunderstood by my best friend，Mike．Last year，I was actively involved in the preparation work for the New Year party．However，Mike misunderstood me，saying that I was just showing off【高分句型二】．Though sad and annoyed，I tried to calm down and managed to to clear up the misunderstanding．（举例）
When faced with misunderstandings，we are supposed to stay calm and clear away the misunderstanding through communication【高分句型三】．Being calm can help us be clear-minded about the situation and find a way out．Besides，communication helps see things from the other's point of view（怎么做）．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
I really think highly of（1）the author，who（2）rescued the girl regardless of（3）his own safety．我真的很钦佩作者，他不顾自身安全救了那个女孩．
（1）think highly of高度评价；钦佩
（2）who引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为the author，在从句中做主语．
（3）regardless of不管，不顾
句型二：
 Mike misunderstood me，saying（1）that I was just showing off（2）．麦克误会了我，说我仅仅是为了炫耀．
（1）saying为现在分词做伴随状语，表示与misunderstood同时进行的动作；
（2）show off炫耀
句型三：
When faced with（1）misunderstandings，we are supposed to stay calm and clear away the misunderstanding（2）through communication．当面临误解时，我们应该保持镇定并且通过交流消除误解．
（1）when faced with misunderstanding（当面临困难时），该句是"连词+分词"的结构再句中做状语，表示我们面临误解的状态．
（2）clear away the emisunderstanding消除误解

解答 The author saved a girl from drowning on his way to school and thus was late for school，for which he was criticized．Later，the teacher apologized for misunderstanding him．（概括）
I really think highly of the author，who rescued the girl regardless of his own safety【高分句型一】．He sets a good example to us and is truly worth learning from．（评价）
Like the author，I was once misunderstood by my best friend，Mike．Last year，I was actively involved in the preparation work for the New Year party．However，Mike misunderstood me，saying that I was just showing off【高分句型二】．Though sad and annoyed，I tried to calm down and managed to to clear up the misunderstanding．（举例）
When faced with misunderstandings，we are supposed to stay calm and clear away the misunderstanding through communication【高分句型三】．Being calm can help us be clear-minded about the situation and find a way out．Besides，communication helps see things from the other's point of view（怎么做）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．