Question

最近，速成鸡事件再一次使食品安全成为了社会热点话题之一。请你根据以下提示以Food Safety Issues为题写一篇短文。
1. 市场上时常出现有安全隐患的食品。
2. 假冒伪劣商品严重损害人们的健康与生活（两点）。
3. 应当采取有效措施（两点）。
注意：1. 词数：120左右；
2. 文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 生词：假冒伪劣商品 fake commodities

Answer 1

Food Safety Issues
Nowadays, unsafe foods can be found, now and then, in the market, which has aroused a lot of public attention. It is reported that these foodstuff ranges from substandard milk powder, dyed steamed buns to pork with lean meat powder.（要点一）Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. To begin with, it is a waste of resource, especially in our country.（要点二）Second, it has bad effect on the reputation of the real manufacturers and brings about moral crisis. Above all, all that matters is food. People’s health and lives are severely threatened if someone buys some unsafe foodstuff.（要点三）Measures should be taken to deal with the problem. On the one hand, strict laws should be passed to punish the producers and the sellers.（要点四）On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish the genuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, the government should strengthen the supervision of all aspects of food.（要点五）I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，是关于假冒伪劣商品的危害，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点不多，需要考生自己组织要点。可以从假冒伪劣商品的影响等方面出发。故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
点评：班开放性作文的难点在于要自行组织要点，本文可以从不同方面的危害出发。理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。