Question

18．孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重．请阅读下面 的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文．

内容要求：1）描述漫画内容；
2）分析漫画所揭示的问题； 
3）提出你的看法．
注意：
1）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2）考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3）词数120左右．
4）文中不能出现考生的具体信息．
参考词汇：pave the way
From the picture，we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating．
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents．Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success．As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas．
Such a situation is of great concern．In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development．Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves．Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看图作文，根据所提供的一幅漫画和所给要点信息谈谈社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重．在写作时人称以第三人称为主．时态为一般将来时和一般现在时．重要短语：arrange sth for sb （为某人安排…）；spare no effort…（不遗余力），pave the way （为…铺平道路），as a consequence （因为），overcome difficulties（克服困难），inspire sb to do （鼓励某人做…），be independent（独立），be reliant on（依赖于…）．

解答 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating．【高分句型】（描述漫画）
 It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents．Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success．As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas．【高分句型】（揭示问题）
 Such a situation is of great concern．In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development．Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves．Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful．【高分句型】（自己看法）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．