Question

【题目】近年来，微信（Wechat）成为了人们日常生活中必不可少的通讯工具，尤其在春节期间，“微信抢红包热”（Red envelop fever）风靡全国。请对这一现象写一篇100词左右的短文，内容包括以下几点：

1.使用微信的利与弊；

2.自己的看法和建议。

In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular.__________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. "Red envelop fever" has swept the country especially during this Spring Festival.

There are many reasons for Wechat to be known.To begin with,Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication,which cuts down the cost of making a phone call.Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people with its various functions.Furthermore,it is available everywhere at any time.

However,problems exist meanwhile.Firstly,our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble.Moreover,it may make communicating with others face to face less.Finally,our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】试题分析：本文是开放式作文。关键是认真审题和分析前面所给的提示，认清写作要求和内容之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。本文内容要求如下：1.使用微信的利与弊；2.自己的看法和建议。根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

本文是开放式作文。内容符合要求，语言简洁明了，时态人称运用准确，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。There are many reasons for Wechat to be known动词不定式一般式的被动式做后置定语；To begin with,Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication,which cuts down the cost of making a phone call.Next,句中使用动词不定式的独立成分，并使用ｗｈｉｃｈ引导非限制性定语从句；Firstly,our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble.含情态动词的被动语态运用巧妙；There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.ｔｈａｔ同位语从句和ａｓ引导的时间状语从句完美结合；另外，In recent years, .Furthermore, However, Firstly，Moreover的使用为文章增色添彩。